Sunday, November 29, 2015

A Step in the Write Direction--November 30, 2015--Sources for Quotations

A Step in the Write Direction
November 30, 2015

Update: Good news: Colonoscopy over with only one small polyp….Not so good news on Shag, my little doggie. First vet said hip dysphasia—surgery between $7-8,000. Dog chiropractor looked at x-rays Saturday and said no dysphasia, torn cruciate ligament in leg. MRI $1500-2000, and unknown cost on surgery. So I have a decision to make. He can be very loving, but also has bitten me a number of times the last few days. Pain pills don’t seem to help. He’s walking on 3 legs….Memory that came to me today. One of my nieces, Sally, was born (years ago) on April 22. In the middle of July that year my mother and I were sitting in the fifth row of the tabernacle at our district camp meeting. Hearing a baby cry, my mother said, “That sounds like Sally.” Sure enough, after the service we saw my sister, husband, and their three-month-old daughter sitting near the back. It amazed me that my mother would recognize that cry. But isn’t that just like the Lord? Out of all the people crying out for help on any given day, He recognizes mine and yours and comes to help.

Thought for the Day: An international gathering of youth met for a week to discuss how better to share Christ's message with the world. Those assembled for the conference read many essays, heard many speakers, watched videos, and discussed ideas with each other. As those attending packed to leave, a young woman from East Africa arose and said, "In my country when we hear that a pagan village is ready to accept the gospel we don't send books, videos, a Bible or even an evangelist. Rather we send the best Christian family we can find because we have found that the example of a good family speaks louder and more clearly than all the books, speeches, and videos in the world" (adapted from sermons@clergy.net, 11/18/15).

Song for the Day:
He knows my name
he knows my every thought
he sees each tear that falls
and hears me when I call
“He Knows My Name,” Francesca Battistelli

Laugh for the Day:
Rules for a Good Marriage

1. Two times a week we go to a nice restaurant, have a beverage, good food, and companionship. She goes on Tuesdays, I go on Fridays.
2. We also sleep in separate beds. Hers is in California, mine is in Texas. 
3. We always hold hands. If I let go, she shops.
4. Remember, marriage is the number one cause of divorce.
5. If you are about to marry Miss Right, make sure her first name is not Always.
(From Wes Tracy’s “Manna Morsels,” attributed to Red Skelton)

Writer’s Tips:                         Sources for Quotations

·        A number of articles I found listed the website Profnet at www.profnet.com—a service provided by Business Newswire—as a good source for information. Sign in as a “journalist,” then post your query and e-mail address so experts can respond.
·        Jot down names of organizations in the Yellow Pages that can be sources of articles or quotations.
·        Check the Encyclopedia of Associations.
·        Get on mailing lists of various state and federal departments such as health, education, and so on, or check www.govspot.
·        Talk to professors at local colleges and universities.
·        Write to authors who write on the same subject as your article or book.
·        Talk to friends and relatives.
·        Purchase books of poetry and quotations.

 Have a good week spreading the
gospel through the printed page.

Donna Clark Goodrich

Now is the time to order Preparing Your Heart for Christmas, an Advent book with 31 devotions leading up to Christmas. Just $5, $2.62 s&h. Makes a nice gift too!

Also, The Little Book of Big Laughs makes a great gift for speakers, pastors, and even teens in your family. $5, can order up to 4 for the same $2.62 s&h.

And for your writer friend, the revised A Step in the Write Direction with assignments throughout, $19.95, $3.22 s&h.

The cooks in your family or circle of friends will like the Michigan or Ohio cookbooks, half  price, at $5.

Monday, November 23, 2015

A Step in the Write Direction--November 23, 2015--Editing Hints and Using Sidebars

A Step in the Write Direction
November 23, 2015

Update: Installed our new pastor and wife yesterday. I really like them and am looking forward to good days ahead for our church….Have a decision to make on my little doggie I got from the pound. X-rays showed “hip dysplasia” and the vet said a surgery would cost between $7-8,000 (which isn’t in my budget!). However, a friend shared that she took her dog to a “dog chiropractor.” He gave him 3 massages at $50 each, then showed her how to do it and her dog is better. So I have a name to contact in this area. Praying that it works as I don’t want to take him back to the pound….Getting ready today for a colonoscopy tomorrow. I have one every five years as my mother and dad both died of cancer of the colon….HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO ALL OF YOU!! The hospital where our two children work put on a big spread for visitors, staff, and families of staff so will probably go there for dinner. MY THANKS TODAY is that our daughter and family are moving back here from Texas on December 6th. Praying that our pastor son-in-law can find a church in the area.

Thought for the Day: Don’t expect to make a lot of money at your writing. The difference between a writer and a park bench is that a park bench will support a family of three (Reg A. Forder, publisher, The Christian Communicator, October 2015, p. 9).

Song for the Day:
Jesus, Jesus, how I trust Him!
How I’ve proved Him o’er and o’er!
Jesus, Jesus, precious Jesus!
O for grace to trust Him more!
            ‘Tis So Sweet to Trust in Jesus,” Louisa M.R. Stead (italics added)

Laugh for the Day:
Fresh out of business school, a young man answered a want ad for an accountant and was interviewed by a businessman who ran a small business that he had started himself. "I need someone with an accounting degree," the businessman said. "But mainly, I'm looking for someone to do my worrying for me. I worry about a lot of things," he said, "but I don't want to have to worry about money. Your job will be to take all the money worries off my back." "I see," the accountant said. "And how much does the job pay?" "I'll start you at eighty thousand," said the businessman. "Eighty thousand dollars!" the accountant exclaimed. "How can such a small business afford a sum like that?" "That," the businessman said, "is your first worry." (sermons@clergy.net, 11/18/15)

Writer’s Tips:                        More Editing Hints, and Using Sidebars
Don't Say the Same Thing Twice
It’s often possible to cut large chunks of material from your article or book because you've repeated the same thought in several paragraphs. Combine these into one strong paragraph. Repeating the same thought over and over says to your reader, "If you didn’t get it that way, maybe you’ll get it this way.” We once had a pastor who said, “I only said this to say that,” and I thought, “Why didn’t you say ‘that’ the first time?” If you’re working on a book or article now, reread it and see if you’ve repeated thoughts that could be reworded and combined into one paragraph.
Use Subheads, Lists, and Sidebars
Break up your chapters and articles by inserting subheads at appropriate places. Or place facts in a bulleted list instead of in a long paragraph. This will make it easier for your reader to remember what you have written. You can also use sidebars; for example, “10 Ways to Break the Plastic Habit.” Sometimes if an editor can’t use the entire article, he or she may purchase the sidebars. Are there places in your manuscript where you could insert a subhead or put some of your points in a bulleted list to make them stand out?

Now is the time to order Preparing Your Heart for Christmas, an Advent book with 31 devotions leading up to Christmas. Just $5, $2.62 s&h. Makes a nice gift too!

Also, The Little Book of Big Laughs makes a great gift for speakers, pastors, and even teens in your family. $5, can order up to 4 for the same $2.62 s&h.

And for your writer friend, the revised A Step in the Write Direction, $19.95, $3.22 s&h.

The cooks in your family or circle of friends will like the Michigan or Ohio cookbooks, half  price, at $5.

HAPPY THANKSGIVING!          




Monday, November 16, 2015

A Step in the Write Direction, November 16, 2015--Keep It Simple (continued)

A Step in the Write Direction 
November 16, 2015

Update: Question that’s been on my mind lately: Where do you draw the line between helping and enabling? When I grew up, one of the things the church kept stressing was that to have JOY, it was Jesus first, Others next, and Yourself last. A few years ago I realized that yes, it’s fine—and necessary—to put Jesus first, but if you continually put others next and don’t care for yourself, soon you’re no good to Jesus or to others. I read two books that helped along this line. One is Boundaries by Dr. John Townsend; the other is When Helping You Is Hurting Me by Carmen Renee Berry. The Thought for the Day below sort of relates to this. The more we give to others, the more we have to spend time in prayer and the Scriptures, or we’ll have nothing to give. Even Sally Stuart, in a talk at a writer’s conferences, said “You can’t write from an empty cup.” I’d be interested in hearing your comments on this subject!

Thought for the Day: One writer said, “If you keep going to the well to fill up your bucket, eventually you pull it up empty unless you find ways to fill the well.” (From Cecil Murphey’s “Writer to Writer.”)

Song for the Day:
Fill my cup Lord, I lift it up, Lord! 
Come and quench this thirsting of my soul; 
Bread of heaven, Feed me till I want no more 
Fill my cup, fill it up and make me whole! 
            “Fill My Cup, Lord,” Richard Blanchard

Laugh for the Day: An elderly gentleman who had serious hearing problems went to the doctor to be fitted for a hearing aid that would return his hearing to 100%.  He went back for further tests a month later and the doctor said, "Your hearing is perfect. Your family must be really pleased that you can hear again." To which the gentleman replied, "Oh, I haven't told my family yet. I just sit around and listen to the conversations. I've changed my will three times!"

Writers Tips                                     Keep It Simple (continued)

Charlie Shedd speaks of using “gobbledygook” and “Protestant Latin.” We may know theological terms, but we need to consider our audience. If we're writing for a preacher's magazine, that's one thing, but most of us aren't.
I love the following story shared by Larry Mowrey in the Come Ye Apart devotional booklet:

People tend to get all phony when the preacher is around. There’s a story about a little boy who came home in the middle of a pastoral call. He didn’t realize that the pastor was there. He just saw his mother, and he came running into the house, holding a dead rat by the tail, exclaiming, “Look, Mom! Look at this rat I caught out behind the barn! I smashed its head in with a baseball bat! I threw rocks at it! I stomped on it! I spit on it, and I…I…” He looked up, saw the preacher, cleared his throat, and said, “and…and…and then the dear Lord called it home!”

“Jesus doesn’t require us to be eloquent in speech,” Mowrey reminds us. “If He has done anything in your life, all you have to do is share that with other people. You’ll always find a way to get the story told. Let’s allow God to use us to touch the lives of others.”[i]
Someone has given this good advice: “Write it quickly, then go back and make it half as long and twice as readable.”

Go through the manuscript you’re working on now and see if you’ve used any words that may be familiar to you but that may confuse your reader.


[i] Larry Mowrey, Come Ye Apart, Nazarene Publishing House, Kansas City, Missouri, November 30, 1996.

 Have a good week spreading the
gospel through the printed page.

Donna Clark Goodrich

·          100-Plus Motivational Moments for Writers and Speakers – half-price $5, $2.69 s&h (This is free if you purchase 5 other books.) (I’ve now purchased the remaining inventory from the publisher. The book has been out-of print for a number of years, so this is it! If you buy FIVE copies, I’ll throw one in free. This will make a great, inexpensive gift for members of your writers’ group.)
·          A Step in the Write Direction—the Complete How-to Guide for Christian Writers—NEW edition with assignments throughout! $19.95, $3.22 s&h
·           A Step in the Write Direction—the Complete How-to Guide for Christian Writers (the original)on sale--$10.00, $3.22 s&h (only 29 left)
·          A Step in the Write Direction—Student Edition with assignments throughout—on sale—$8, $2.72 s&h)
·          The Freedom of Letting Go (new one coming out will have discussion questions; can be used in S.S. class or small group); original copies without questions now on sale for half-price--$7.50, $2.69 s&h
·          Healing in God’s Time (story of Dave Clark, composer of 26 songs that have gone to #1 on the charts); was $15; now $10, $2.69 s&h
·          The Little Book of Big Laughs—105 purse/pocket-size book of clean jokes—$5; up to 4 for same s&h—$2.69. Great gift for writers, pastors, and teens.
·          Preparing Your Heart for Christmas (31 Advent Devotions) half-price—$5
·          Michigan and Ohio Cookbooks; half-price $5 each, plus s&h (depending on number ordered)




Monday, November 9, 2015

A Step in the Write Direction--November 9, 2015--Keep It Simple

A Step in the Write Direction
November 9, 2015

Update:  Every morning for the past few days when I walk my dog, I pass 19 crosses on the lawn in front of the clubhouse--each one with a name on it, signifying someone from the mobile home park who died this past year. It's hard not to look at them, knowing one has the name of my husband. But last night, passing them, I realized it is the Cross, and the One who died on it, that gives me the hope of seeing Gary again!...Speaking of my doggie, he nabbed at me again this morning 3 times. When I got up, I saw he wasn’t walking on his left hind leg, so he must be hurting and I must have touched it when I moved him on the bed. Taking him to the vet at 12:30. I’m really getting attached to the little guy….Thoughts today of my bestest friend of 69 years (since 2nd grade) who passed away a year ago today, and my brother-in-law who died 9 years ago today….Had a nice combination Veterans/Memorial service in clubhouse yesterday with family members lighting a candle for a relative. I did okay until the Taps....Say thanks to a veteran this week!

Thought for the Day: Lord, Thou knowest...that I am growing older and will someday be old. ...Keep me reasonably sweet....a sour old person is one of the crowning works of the devil... Make me thoughtful, but not moody; helpful but not bossy. With my vast store of wisdom, it seems a pity not to use it all, but Thou knowest, Lord, that I want a few friends at the end. (Author unknown, from Wes Tracy’s “Manna Morsels”).

Song for the Day:
Down through the ages, God wrote His love
With the same hands that suffered and bled;
Giving all that he had to give,
A message so easily read.
I love you, I love you
That's what Calvary said;
I love you, I love you,
I love you, written in red.
Gordon Jensen, “Written in Red”

Laugh for the Day: A pickpocket appeared before the judge for a series of crimes. The judge said, “Sir, you are hereby fined $100.” The thief’s lawyer stood up and said, “Your honor, my client has only $75 on him at this time, but if you’d allow him a few minutes in the crowd…”

Writer’s Tips:             Keep It Simple

Jesus gave us the most profound truths in simple language, for example, John 3:16 and John 11:35. Short and easy to understand. I'll never forget the first Sunday I attended church after my mother's funeral. The preacher spoke on John 11:35, relating how Jesus wept after the death of His good friend Lazarus. The strength and power of those two words enveloped me and I knew that, in my hour of sorrow, Jesus was weeping with me.

As a teen I worked for a local variety store. Each day, walking to the employees’ lounge, I passed by nine paper sacks on the wall—ranging from the largest the store used to the smallest. Each sack had a word on it, and together they spelled out: DON’T USE THIS SIZE IF THIS SIZE WILL DO.

That's what we need to remember as writers. Don’t use a five-syllable word if a one- or two-syllable word will do.

 Have a good week spreading the
gospel through the printed page.

Donna Clark Goodrich

·          100-Plus Motivational Moments for Writers and Speakers – half-price $5, $2.69 s&h (This is free if you purchase 5 other books.) (I’ve now purchased the remaining inventory from the publisher. The book has been out-of print for a number of years, so this is it! If you buy FIVE copies, I’ll throw one in free. This will make a great, inexpensive gift for members of your writers’ group.)
·          A Step in the Write Direction—the Complete How-to Guide for Christian Writers—NEW edition with assignments throughout! $19.95, $3.22 s&h
·           A Step in the Write Direction—the Complete How-to Guide for Christian Writers (the original)on sale--$10.00, $3.22 s&h (only 29 left)
·          A Step in the Write Direction—Student Edition with assignments throughout—on sale—$8, $2.72 s&h)
·          The Freedom of Letting Go (new one coming out will have discussion questions; can be used in S.S. class or small group); original copies without questions now on sale for half-price--$7.50, $2.69 s&h
·          Healing in God’s Time (story of Dave Clark, composer of 26 songs that have gone to #1 on the charts); was $15; now $10, $2.69 s&h
·          The Little Book of Big Laughs—105 purse/pocket-size book of clean jokes—$5; up to 4 for same s&h—$2.69. Great gift for writers, pastors, and teens.
·          Preparing Your Heart for Christmas (31 Advent Devotions) half-price—$5
·          Michigan and Ohio Cookbooks; half-price $5 each, plus s&h (depending on number ordered)








Tuesday, November 3, 2015

A Step in the Write Direction, November 3, 2015, Leads (continued)

A Step in the Write Direction

November 3, 2015

Update: I’m sorry this is late. I just finished one of the most difficult editing jobs I’ve ever done. Turns out, it really wasn’t written as a book; it was transcribed from a series of sermons so there were a lot of misquoted scriptures, misspelled words, and many, many thoughts repeated. I did have to stop a third of the way through and raise the price. The final copy will be emailed back tonight!....Good news! Our daughter, Patty, who had the rotator cuff surgery ten weeks ago went back to work last Thursday—light duty for the next six weeks. She’ll be telling people where to go (wouldn’t you like to do that?). Seriously, she’ll be taking people to the different departments of the hospital for tests, x-rays, etc. And our son, Robert, who was off for six weeks with heart problems, went back to work yesterday. All his tests turned out okay; cardiologist said chest pains were just “spasms.” He’s a type A personality and a hard worker…. My little doggie—which has been renamed “Shag” after a dog we lost years ago—has settled down. Whenever I put my shoes on, he gets excited because he knows we’re going for a walk. And when I put my nightgown on and turn off the living room light, he makes a beeline for my bed and is there waiting for me. He’s been a lot of company!

Thought for the Day:
Give me the love that leads the way, 
The faith that nothing can dismay, 
The hope no disappointments tire, 
The passion that will burn like fire, 
Let me not sink to be a clod: 
Make me Thy fuel, Flame of God.
—Amy Carmichael

Song for the Day:
I have settled the question, hallelujah!
I will never turn back from the narrow way.
I am going thro’ with Jesus, hallelujah!
Till I reach the gates of glory some sweet day.
            Haldor Lillenas, “I Have Settled the Question”

Laugh for the Day: The farmer made his chickens swim in hot water so they would lay hard-boiled eggs.

Writer’s Tips:                       Leads (continued)

One of the things I've noticed while editing manuscripts is that I often can delete the first two or three paragraphs without hurting the article. Sometimes it helps to move the lead paragraph to the middle and then flash back as seen in the following example:

A friend wrote an article that several publishers had rejected. The story told of a girl in a wheelchair who was admitted to the hospital. While there, her fiancĂ© didn’t visit her for several days, and when he finally did, he announced that he wanted to break the engagement because he had fallen in love with her roommate.

After he left, she wheeled down to the hospital chapel, sat in front of the statue of Christ, and said, “Why, Lord? Why did you take Jim away from me?”

Up to this point my friend had written the story chronologically. I suggested that she move the paragraph about the chapel to the beginning of the article. Right away the reader will wonder, Why is the girl in a wheelchair? Why is she in the hospital? Who is Jim? And how was he taken from her?

Making that one change, my friend sold the article the next time out to a singles’ magazine.

If you’ve had an article returned several times, can you change the lead to get the editor’s attention quicker?

 Have a good week spreading the
gospel through the printed page.

Donna Clark Goodrich

·          100-Plus Motivational Moments for Writers and Speakers – half-price $5, $2.69 s&h (This is free if you purchase 5 other books.) (I’ve now purchased the remaining inventory from the publisher. The book has been out-of print for a number of years, so this is it! If you buy FIVE copies, I’ll throw one in free. This will make a great, inexpensive gift for members of your writers’ group.)
·          A Step in the Write Direction—the Complete How-to Guide for Christian Writers—NEW edition with assignments throughout! $19.95, $3.22 s&h
·           A Step in the Write Direction—the Complete How-to Guide for Christian Writers (the original)on sale--$10.00, $3.22 s&h (only 29 left)
·          A Step in the Write Direction—Student Edition with assignments throughout—on sale—$8, $2.72 s&h)
·          The Freedom of Letting Go (new one coming out will have discussion questions; can be used in S.S. class or small group); original copies without questions now on sale for half-price--$7.50, $2.69 s&h
·          Healing in God’s Time (story of Dave Clark, composer of 26 songs that have gone to #1 on the charts); was $15; now $10, $2.69 s&h
·          The Little Book of Big Laughs—105 purse/pocket-size book of clean jokes—$5; up to 4 for same s&h—$2.69. Great gift for writers, pastors, and teens.
·          Preparing Your Heart for Christmas (31 Advent Devotions) half-price—$5

·          Michigan and Ohio Cookbooks; half-price $5 each, plus s&h (depending on number ordered